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  【全国卷I海南、宁夏】

  【试题回放】假定你是李华,正在英国接受英语培训,住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家,你准备外出,请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条,内容包括:

  1.外出购物

  2.替房东还书 K

  3.Tracy 来电话留言:1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消

  2)此事已告知Susan

  3) 尽快回电

  注意:1. 词数100左右;

  2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

  Mrs. Wilson,I'm going out shopping, and won't be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o'clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn't meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change. Yours,
威尔逊太太,我要出去购物,而且没有回来,直到下午5:00。我和我一起拍了这本书,你让我回到城市图书馆。下午一点左右,特雷西打来电话,说她明天早上去博尔顿咖啡不能见你,因为她有重要的事要参加。她感到非常抱歉,但说,你可以为会议设置一些其他时间。她想让你尽快给她回电话。她已经告诉苏珊关于这个变化的。你的,

  Li Hua
      李华

  [名师点评]

  本文属于提纲式要点作文,是学生比较熟悉的题材,体现了英语学习应该注意实用性,生活型的原则。行文人称、时态运用恰当、准确,各个要点间逻辑连贯,行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译,而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句,因此要仔细组织语言,合理安排结构。在语言方面,要特别注意简洁明了,开头要开门见山。
 


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